Overall a pleasing shot. Like anything there can be improvements
The thing that bothers me most is that the key light is a little too bright. It could have been at least a stop lower to add a few contouring shadows to highlight you better with the rim light to camera left that looks great. Also less power overall to the lights would have allowed for shallower DOF by allowing use of a wider aperture. The pillows while in bokeh are still a tad distracting. I'd prefer them a bit softer in focus, that would make you stand out more.
Your pose is spot on. Whoever did the makeup (I don't know if you did, I am guessing not) could have brought a little more attention to your eyes as they are quite expressive. Hair could be styled differently just to give it a slightly different vibe, maybe something more 60's as the setting reminds me of some great 60's era boudoir photography I recently seen.
Still an enjoyable photo.